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Henjiu Henjiu Yiqian part 1As Belle and Mr. Gold sealed their union with a kiss, a cool breeze suddenly ruffled the leaves of the trees around them. Belle felt her new husband stiffen, and as he pulled away, she saw a flash in his eyes of the monstrous Dark One, master of magic, that he had once been."It—it can't be," he muttered."What is it, Rumple? What's wrong?"He looked around, inhaling deeply, sniffing the air. "Do you smell that?"Belle breathed in, but smelled only the clean odours of the June forest: leaves, warm damp earth, sunlit air. She shook her head. "It just smells like the woods to me." She glanced at Dr. Hopper and her father, who both seemed mildly bemused by the sudden change in Rumplestiltskin's demeanour, but just as unaware as she was of whatever faint magical aura he must sense."I smell…snow," Rumple whispered."Snow? How can that be? It's summer.""I know that. Do you think I don't know that?" he hissed, and drew back when she flinched from the anger in his voice. "I